Alrighty! I got the okay from an Admin at PMD-E to add another Member because my Team has made no Appearances in the Missions/Events. So here's The New PartyPokie, Panini the Buizel! He's currently stuck in the Past, but we shall see how things play out. He may even be back early, I'm not sure yet.
SPOILER: I don't want to Redo anything before it happens, but the Team Name
will be changing. Just wanted to let any Admins know that It's arranged beforehand, and that I'm not trying to break any Rules!
Personality KielBasa is KindHearted but also rather Standoffish (Compound words, I love them lol). He grew up in a small Village, so he isn't familiar with approaching others. He's also very Naive, he hasn't experienced much in the world, in fact this is his first time going off on his own. That combined with his Curiosity makes him a very vulnerable target, and lands him in Troubling situations frequently. He can't defend himself too well so he prefers not to Venture anywhere alone. He is Honest for the most part, but will tell little lies here and there. That's kinda all we got right now
Panini is a more Serious type, he takes care of Business (or tries to) in a Swift and Simple fashion.
He can't stand the Name Panini and Introduces himself as Pierce. More later!
haha he would love that! he really needs more friends, he's kind of a loner lol X3
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I think I should explain the ratings first for this one, 3 1/2 stars for vision because admittedly this is one of the nicest Apps I've seen. Originality 3 because it's nothing I've haven't seen before except for the pattern which is... distracting. The technique is also 4 1/2 because I find your style is rather nice. Impact gets a low score because this is a application app for the group, nothing to go over-excited about when it comes to ~inspiration~ and whatnot.
And now I've got that out of the way, I shall get to the main critque. But first I'll like to adress a few things...
Like why does this keep appearing in my messages! I think this is what, the third time or something? I know you want people to see this but you can just edit it instead of taking it out of the group and editing it. To tell the truth it gets annoying... but you are not the first person to do this.
Alright, now that is aside let's get the real deal.
First KielBasa(how do you pronounce that?) almost alright with him,the shading techniques you used with both him and Panini I really love. But I'll just pay closer attention to his legs. There are... awkard loonking, especially his fron leg, the one that is lifting his paw. In fact the paw looks sort of wrong too. I think I can suggest that you try to make the legs a bit bigger and possibly make the hind ones not so stiff. Poochyena is based on a wolf and with your style it looks like one(close enough) so you can either look up tutorials for paws and animal legs, or you can watch some canine docmentry on youtube or something. Your choice on whether you follow or you don't.
Now to Panini I keep on thinking about the pink and cute yet fiesty Panini the catbear-rabbit thing off of Chowder, I miss that show.
I have no idea where he came from or no idea where KB came from either, there are no events or missions of these two. Not even misc. stuff that shows much of their personality so it's all tell and no show. You say very little about him compared to KB, but you thought it was necessary to bold the fact his name is Panini and also Pierce. If that's the case wouldn't Panini be more of an annoying nickname rather the name he would rather be called? It's on the app!
Panini has almost the same problem as KB, his forelegs or arms are too low. Or that's what it looks to me, he's sitting down so I can't see his actual standing stance.
Hm, and that's pretty much it. Not much to go from here on out. So I hope you enjoyed your critque you've been striving for~
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