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PartyProwess: THE RE-UP by RoyalWolfen PartyProwess: THE RE-UP by RoyalWolfen
Alrighty! I got the okay from an Admin at PMD-E to add another Member because my Team has made no Appearances in the Missions/Events. So here's The New PartyPokie, Panini the Buizel! He's currently stuck in the Past, but we shall see how things play out. He may even be back early, I'm not sure yet.

SPOILER: I don't want to Redo anything before it happens, but the Team Name will be changing. Just wanted to let any Admins know that It's arranged beforehand, and that I'm not trying to break any Rules!


Personality


KielBasa is KindHearted but also rather Standoffish (Compound words, I love them lol). He grew up in a small Village, so he isn't familiar with approaching others. He's also very Naive, he hasn't experienced much in the world, in fact this is his first time going off on his own. That combined with his Curiosity makes him a very vulnerable target, and lands him in Troubling situations frequently. He can't defend himself too well so he prefers not to Venture anywhere alone. He is Honest for the most part, but will tell little lies here and there. That's kinda all we got right now ;P

Panini is a more Serious type, he takes care of Business (or tries to) in a Swift and Simple fashion. He can't stand the Name Panini and Introduces himself as Pierce. More later!
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You want a critque, well I'll give you a critque. And I shall nit-pick everything I see or read because that's how I'am.

I think I should explain the ratings first for this one, 3 1/2 stars for vision because admittedly this is one of the nicest Apps I've seen. Originality 3 because it's nothing I've haven't seen before except for the pattern which is... distracting. The technique is also 4 1/2 because I find your style is rather nice. Impact gets a low score because this is a application app for the group, nothing to go over-excited about when it comes to ~inspiration~ and whatnot.

And now I've got that out of the way, I shall get to the main critque. But first I'll like to adress a few things...

Like why does this keep appearing in my messages! I think this is what, the third time or something? I know you want people to see this but you can just edit it instead of taking it out of the group and editing it. To tell the truth it gets annoying... but you are not the first person to do this.

Alright, now that is aside let's get the real deal.

First KielBasa(how do you pronounce that?) almost alright with him,the shading techniques you used with both him and Panini I really love. But I'll just pay closer attention to his legs. There are... awkard loonking, especially his fron leg, the one that is lifting his paw. In fact the paw looks sort of wrong too. I think I can suggest that you try to make the legs a bit bigger and possibly make the hind ones not so stiff. Poochyena is based on a wolf and with your style it looks like one(close enough) so you can either look up tutorials for paws and animal legs, or you can watch some canine docmentry on youtube or something. Your choice on whether you follow or you don't.

Now to Panini I keep on thinking about the pink and cute yet fiesty Panini the catbear-rabbit thing off of Chowder, I miss that show.

I have no idea where he came from or no idea where KB came from either, there are no events or missions of these two. Not even misc. stuff that shows much of their personality so it's all tell and no show. You say very little about him compared to KB, but you thought it was necessary to bold the fact his name is Panini and also Pierce. If that's the case wouldn't Panini be more of an annoying nickname rather the name he would rather be called? It's on the app!

Panini has almost the same problem as KB, his forelegs or arms are too low. Or that's what it looks to me, he's sitting down so I can't see his actual standing stance.

Hm, and that's pretty much it. Not much to go from here on out. So I hope you enjoyed your critque you've been striving for~
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Chocolate-Bunnie Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Kielbasa is soooooo cute!!! My Whispy has a pink ribbon/bow too! [link] Maybe they can be friends! :D
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awww thank you so much!!! :D haha he would love that! he really needs more friends, he's kind of a loner lol X3
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Chocolate-Bunnie Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Allllright!! :D Whispy is now his official friend!! X3
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RoyalRoses Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:heart: Panini
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hehehe :iconblushplz:
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Landreigon Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
Awww, this is so awesome!
KielBasa looks so cute! >w<
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww haha thank you so much!! :meow:
your little Zoey is so adorable too X3
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Landreigon Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
You're welcome and thanks very much too ^^
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lemondragon19 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Wonderful ands adorable app I've appeared to lay my eyes upon +v+!!

Welcome to PMDe! ovo I hope you enjoy your time here! Ever need a buddy or a helping hand to get around feel free to lean on me for any support! I enjoy helping my fellow PMD'ers!
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahaha awww thankies! :iconiloveitplz:

haha wow thats awesome! i definitely will let you know if i need anything! ^^
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