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PartyProwess: THE RE-UP by RoyalWolfen PartyProwess: THE RE-UP by RoyalWolfen
Alrighty! I got the okay from an Admin at PMD-E to add another Member because my Team has made no Appearances in the Missions/Events. So here's The New PartyPokie, Panini the Buizel! He's currently stuck in the Past, but we shall see how things play out. He may even be back early, I'm not sure yet.

SPOILER: I don't want to Redo anything before it happens, but the Team Name will be changing. Just wanted to let any Admins know that It's arranged beforehand, and that I'm not trying to break any Rules!


Personality


KielBasa is KindHearted but also rather Standoffish (Compound words, I love them lol). He grew up in a small Village, so he isn't familiar with approaching others. He's also very Naive, he hasn't experienced much in the world, in fact this is his first time going off on his own. That combined with his Curiosity makes him a very vulnerable target, and lands him in Troubling situations frequently. He can't defend himself too well so he prefers not to Venture anywhere alone. He is Honest for the most part, but will tell little lies here and there. That's kinda all we got right now ;P

Panini is a more Serious type, he takes care of Business (or tries to) in a Swift and Simple fashion. He can't stand the Name Panini and Introduces himself as Pierce. More later!
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You want a critque, well I'll give you a critque. And I shall nit-pick everything I see or read because that's how I'am.

I think I should explain the ratings first for this one, 3 1/2 stars for vision because admittedly this is one of the nicest Apps I've seen. Originality 3 because it's nothing I've haven't seen before except for the pattern which is... distracting. The technique is also 4 1/2 because I find your style is rather nice. Impact gets a low score because this is a application app for the group, nothing to go over-excited about when it comes to ~inspiration~ and whatnot.

And now I've got that out of the way, I shall get to the main critque. But first I'll like to adress a few things...

Like why does this keep appearing in my messages! I think this is what, the third time or something? I know you want people to see this but you can just edit it instead of taking it out of the group and editing it. To tell the truth it gets annoying... but you are not the first person to do this.

Alright, now that is aside let's get the real deal.

First KielBasa(how do you pronounce that?) almost alright with him,the shading techniques you used with both him and Panini I really love. But I'll just pay closer attention to his legs. There are... awkard loonking, especially his fron leg, the one that is lifting his paw. In fact the paw looks sort of wrong too. I think I can suggest that you try to make the legs a bit bigger and possibly make the hind ones not so stiff. Poochyena is based on a wolf and with your style it looks like one(close enough) so you can either look up tutorials for paws and animal legs, or you can watch some canine docmentry on youtube or something. Your choice on whether you follow or you don't.

Now to Panini I keep on thinking about the pink and cute yet fiesty Panini the catbear-rabbit thing off of Chowder, I miss that show.

I have no idea where he came from or no idea where KB came from either, there are no events or missions of these two. Not even misc. stuff that shows much of their personality so it's all tell and no show. You say very little about him compared to KB, but you thought it was necessary to bold the fact his name is Panini and also Pierce. If that's the case wouldn't Panini be more of an annoying nickname rather the name he would rather be called? It's on the app!

Panini has almost the same problem as KB, his forelegs or arms are too low. Or that's what it looks to me, he's sitting down so I can't see his actual standing stance.

Hm, and that's pretty much it. Not much to go from here on out. So I hope you enjoyed your critque you've been striving for~
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Chocolate-Bunnie Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Kielbasa is soooooo cute!!! My Whispy has a pink ribbon/bow too! [link] Maybe they can be friends! :D
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awww thank you so much!!! :D haha he would love that! he really needs more friends, he's kind of a loner lol X3
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Chocolate-Bunnie Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Allllright!! :D Whispy is now his official friend!! X3
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RoyalRoses Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:heart: Panini
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hehehe :iconblushplz:
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Landreigon Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
Awww, this is so awesome!
KielBasa looks so cute! >w<
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww haha thank you so much!! :meow:
your little Zoey is so adorable too X3
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Landreigon Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
You're welcome and thanks very much too ^^
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lemondragon19 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Wonderful ands adorable app I've appeared to lay my eyes upon +v+!!

Welcome to PMDe! ovo I hope you enjoy your time here! Ever need a buddy or a helping hand to get around feel free to lean on me for any support! I enjoy helping my fellow PMD'ers!
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahaha awww thankies! :iconiloveitplz:

haha wow thats awesome! i definitely will let you know if i need anything! ^^
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lemondragon19 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
ovo Sweet deal then! Can't wait to see what adventures shall unfold with this team~
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Dragon-of-Twilight Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Still loving him. Ahh soo much ;3;
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahahaha awwws thanks girlie X3 ps you never finished working on your mightyena like you said you would a billion years ago lmao XD
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Dragon-of-Twilight Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aaaahh I have been caught!! xD
I know I haven't ;w; I just can't seem to find a look for him that I consistantly like :c
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww I know how that is ;P haha
it's all good, I'm just messing with you beezy! it would be such a beautiful sight to behold though lol XD
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Dragon-of-Twilight Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
...this is your fault. [link]
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconiloveitplz: I'm so proud of myself! ;P heheheh seriously though its amazing.
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Dragon-of-Twilight Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha yep. First you, then reading *ShadeofShinon's emerald nuzlocke (in which there is a smexy mightyena) gave me the spur of the moment motivation to do this :D
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol oh lordy that's exactly what would get you motivated hahaha! XD well good keep that good shit UP!
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Kitty--RawR Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Artist
Hes adorable!
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahahaha aww thank you!! ^^
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Loumun-Versen Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student General Artist
cutie !!
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hehehe awww thankies X3
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Loumun-Versen Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student General Artist
^^ np
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springheel Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
She is very beautiful!
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*he hahahah thanks so much though! XD
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springheel Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
Anytime!
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Liechi Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Perfect shading is way too perfect ;-;
and KielBasa is waaaaay tooo adorable
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay! :love: hehe thanks, I'm still experimenting with some shading techs and im glad its working out! :D
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Wyvern-1 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
Yus! Real Pooches wear PINK! :icondragonyell:

But oh my God, that's quite possibly the best Poochyena I've ever seen! Kinda makes me wonder why he's a Rogue...
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahahah I know right!! SO glad someone gets it ;P

oh wow, thanks soo much!! :love:
lol he's not very valiant or courageous, and doesn't think he'd be able to rescue if it came down to it ;P
and i don't think he has the mental capacity to be a merchant haha!
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Pantypix Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
Oh, I really like this style! Good work!
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww thank you!! i do try my best! :iconiloveitmoreplz:
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RoyalRoses Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
This must be an improvement on your design because he looks very nice.

Did you do the icon? It looks good too.

Are we allowed to add a second teammate? I wanted to add one on mines but couldn't think of any.
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahahah aww thank you so much! :meow: it definitely was, the old ref wasn't as aesthetically pleasing lol :)

I sure did! I did it a while ago but I still love it hahaha.

Well, they give you oppertunities to add members throughout the missions (or get eggs) if you complete them, but i havent done ANY missions yet so i figured it would be alright to throw in a member since my team hasn't made any appearances whatsover haha. i asked if it was okay but no one replied, so I'm just gonna try it! ;P
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RoyalRoses Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I'm waiting for the opportunity for the egg thing to arrived so I can place the second teammate in there. :3
I did two events and one mission so far...

I literally can't wait for it. > 3 <

Are you able to make pokemon icons for points?
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww! haha how awful, it must hurt to wait X3 I know, since you can start with two members anyway, they should let us add another whenever we want for free ;P

Aha of course! which poke do you want me to draw? you can give me points afterward if you like it, if not its on the Haus ^^
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RoyalRoses Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
My bad, I meant to send you this.[link]
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
[link] all done! ^^
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RoyalRoses Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Awww, awsome! :)
Could you do a pic of my lovely Vulpix, Rebecca?
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How much would it be for the icon? I have 70 points to give. :)

Someone told me who seems to been a member longer than me said you have to wait for M9 for the eggs and recruiting teams. ; _ ;
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'll do my best! :D what color do you want the background?
uhh how much do they usually cost? lol is 25 too much? XD

Awws. well, you could always just have your new member make appearances here and there until then!
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RoyalRoses Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Yeah true. :)
25 isn't much! It's just right!
I'm a fan of pink, so pink would be good. <3
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha coolcool! i'll get on it then, hope you like it! ^^
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Megaloceros-Urhirsch Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Shes cute. <33
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FuriouslyFurry Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student
He. That gender marker.
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Megaloceros-Urhirsch Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wt... i think its a she why al this pink, heart, slender body and pose. xDDD
Sorry! >^<
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RoyalWolfen Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahaha It's totally okay XD I recycled the background from another pic i was working on (it was originally black and grey) and the heart was the character's insignia (she was a girl lol) pink is the color of power in his village, and his body...well, i'm just no that good at drawing animal bodies haha!
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FuriouslyFurry Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student
Happens to the best of us. And me. ;)
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Megaloceros-Urhirsch Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahaha xDD
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ankrezy Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist
oh my golly, he seems like the perfect kind of pokemon that my quantum would poke fun at. i have to draw them together when i have the time. x3 anyways, love the character. your style is adorable~
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